Personal Statement for Medical School

I need you to help me finish and improve personal statement for medical school application. I have attached the draft i made so far and my resume. It is almost complete but i need to add few things to make it more interesting and easy to read. The goal is to make an impact on the reader so he could remember me when he/she is done reading my statement. The personal statement should answer the question of why i want to pursue medicine and why i could be good at it, what makes me different or special. i could give more details about my life if necessary but i am bad at writing. English is my second language.