Review Plan based on peer review

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read the classmate feedback and suggestions. Choose one suggestion and filled up the prompt bellow. ( my essay that was revied by the classmate is attached)
The purpose of the revision plan is to give us direction when we sit down to revise. Additionally, it is important to think about the suggestions that we have been given, not to just make the changes because someone said to.
Sort through your peer feedback (file attached) , and consider those suggestions, also take into account the plan you have in your head for moving your paper forward (additional sources, other idea you want to incorporate, etc.).

S1: (here you are to write out the first suggestion).
R1:( here you are to write out your 3-part response)
1) (I agree with this suggestion or I disagree with this suggestion)
2) (Explain why).
3) (If you agree, explain how you will incorporate this revision into your paper. Or if you disagree, explain how you will revise your paper to keep readers from responding that way).

4-Self-assessment: Additionally, what else have you identified that you need to work on in this revision?

Rational Choice and Strain theories and how they can relate to being an attorney

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What I have written so far:

For as long as I can remember I have always wanted to be an attorney, in more recent years I have found where I would like my focus to be.  That focus would be tax law, probate, wills, etc. at the federal, state and local level.  Many of my cases would-be white-collar type crimes that involve organizations, individuals and even some government entities. I believe that rational choice theory and strain theory most closely relate to this career and most financial type crimes.  According to our text book rational choice theory is when the offender weighs their options in the cost and benefits of crime before they commit any crimes. This shows that every person is faced with a choice and they make this willingly. Under strain theory not everyone has the same opportunities and this can often cause a stain on finances, especially if an individual feels limited by how successful they are. Nobody likes to be seen as a failure. For some being unable to reach their dream can make them cross moral lines and often engage in illegal behavior. Societal pressures and the allure of the American dream can create criminals if they see their own failure as a threat to their or their family’s wellbeing.

Rational choice theory is defined by Siegel as a theory that law-violating behavior is the product of careful thought and planning. It assumes that people are self-interested and will be willing to violate the law after considering both personal factors (such as money, revenge, thrills, and entertainment) and situational factors (such as target availability, security measures, and police presence). Anyone is a potential criminal if they calculate that the profits are great and the risks are small. (Siegel, 4-2). Many studies have been done on this topic, some have failed and others have been very successful using the theory. One of those such successful studies

Need to use Criminolgy The Core by Siegel and 4 sources,

Predictive Analytics using JMP software

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Build a simple regression model with binary variable in a yes/no or 0/1 format, or build model with continuous variable through JMP software. Find data using links available in the uploaded files or using other sources of choice. Detailed instructions are in the uploaded files along with an example of the project.

General Electric (GE)

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Finish my powerpoint slides, and in the notes section write for me in bullet form what I need to read while presenting the slides.

You should talk about in the slides, The companies introduction who they are and what business they do, then move onto the framework we are going to be using that is in the document also uploaded, The ISO31000, then separate slide talk about the risk dashboard, in this company we have 3 risks also in the document and you can find more information online are 1. Strategic Risk, 2. Operational Risk and 3. Cyber Risk. you have to fill the chart with the risk type and categories and description as stated. I can upload class slides for you to understand how to do it if you would like. Then talk about our Proposal and its pros and cons.