wire sculpture

I will attach the rubric and the slides down below
I have already completed the presentation, all i want you to do is proofread it and improve and edit it overall
i want you to focus on the rubric and  make sure everything is included from the rubric (whatever is asked for)
and make sure it hits the exemplifying (excellent) standard focus on all the criteria except criteria 3 but the rest make sure to include
please!