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                                                      What motivated me to go back to school?

                                                  Written by: Jerrika Ja’Brea George-Hawkins  

                                                     1/5/2023

 

 

 

 

My Main Motivation is happiness within myself and my life. I’m at a point in my life that I don’t feel down. There was a time I was in a dark place, and I had no self-esteem, and no self-confidence. I’m ready now. I’m ready to learn and earn my high school diploma. I know I deserve to do that for myself. There are so many people in my life that have always advised and encouraged me to go back to school. Going back to school and is what I needed to do. All those people believed in me; I’m determined to try.                

 

I have various reasons starting with myself for regaining the strength to getting my life back on track as far as my self-responsibilities and self- goals for the better of my kids and of course myself. At the time I started High school I didn’t take it seriously enough outside of the extra curriculum activities and hanging out with friends. Because allowed a lot of things to distract me in school and honestly, I wasn’t focused enough at the time of high school I wasn’t thinking about the impacts that without having a H.S diploma could put a stop on so much upon life and abilities as far as a job, career, or life wanting and changing abilities.

 

My second Motivation are my two beautiful babies to where I look at them and I would love to see my kids to be proud of their mother for going back to school to make a life-changing decision not only for me, but for them and to be financially stable, and more understanding in the books so that I will be able to help them with their educational problems if they don’t understand, perhaps I’ll feel more comfortable in knowing that I can help my kids. I believe I’ll be more focused and encouraging patient.

 

My third motivation are my mother and grandmother, they have been amazing in my life, and I have finally realized that they only want the best for me. Those two people have always done so much for my kids and me throughout our lives. They’ve always supported me in my ventures, and they believe that I can do succeed and continue to motivate me to be the best in life no matter what life brings forth. I would love to see my mother and grandmother proud of me for getting my diploma. I would love to share that amazing moment with my family and with my grandmother still alive and well to see me walk across that stage.

 

My Fourth Motivation is my Fiancé just for being so inspiring in my life and for loving me and keep and just positive refreshing me on “How smart I am and uplifting me to be myself “. It’s the baby you got this and deserving the world if you go for it for me and just the positive energy, he brings to me.

 

My Fifth motivation is getting everything I deserve that God has for me and my family and I’m asking God into blessing me with pursing getting either of the degrees. I’ve been wanting to see myself into for years. Being a Dental Assistant or to be a Hygienist through Fortis Institute this coming spring and seeking to pursue into performing at Jefferson State for embalming and Business administrations. I’m seeking to live a comfortable life without having to worry about money and living for better.

 

I’m setting and reaching a deadline that gives me such a feeling of a sense of accomplishments I have to complete. I have multiple of business ideas into my future and manifesting set into my future Like I love to cook, I own my own Auto Car washing and detailing service, and Both of my kids are owning their own income-based businesses and I would love to invest or help them make it in this world by starting their own businesses. Of course, I know I got this and I’m very mentally prepared for my life goals that God Has for me and my babies. I’m ready to see God show out for me with everything I’ve mentioned as far as my H.S diploma and getting my degrees and seeking to attend Jefferson State for Funeral Services education and trade into being a mortician or embalmer for my own funeral parlor.

 

I’m seeking those for particular reasons: Personal and publicly view on respect others loved ones with their loved ones final resting moments should be very content and professional and respectable. I have so many dreams I would love to turn a dream and pull thorough for myself, and I have into reality a great personality that will show my true side of believing God has blessed me to learn a little bit different with things throughout my journey of a successful life. I’m going to every single individual that I have mention throughout my motivation essay.

 

I’m going to continue pushing and staying prayed up and keeping my faith high. The Lord knows I know this journey isn’t going to be easy, but my faith is set on beyond a limit of success and personal goals. I want to be able to give back to my mother and grandmother because they’re the most genuine people that their love is just as pure to me as much as my kids are to me. Being able to provide will change the curse I thought got a hold of me to where I didn’t know how to feel, think, or how to focus on what I needed to do as an adult with two kids.

 

I was thinking so low and ugly of the terrible thoughts of not making in life. My H.S diploma is important to me because it’s the beginning of having more choices as I further my education. And of course, it’s the key that helps me open all the doors to build my present and future and its very important stage in my life. I’m more mature enough to face life and own my degrees on my own and I’m ready to enter a university and owning a permanent job. My H.S diploma is important to me because it represented years of hard work, dedication, and perseverance. I’m just ready for my diploma to provide me with a strong solid foundation to further my ambitions and obtain my professional career of choice.

 

Ready to symbolize of completing 4 years in 8 weeks with Tellis educational program this fall and winter and ready to show my family that its very worth going back for and getting. I’m just blessed to be able to have abilities to wanting to continue my education to the better of my life and go for everything and anything that life brings to me on a golden platter. I’m ready to present to my future employers that I am very responsible and have self-disciple will work well and complete assignments. I’ll let employers know that I can do the job that I can succeed, am very capable of setting goals, and making them happen.

 

I’m willing to get this time now or ever I couldn’t fix my mouth to say never because my life is setting on reaching my highest potential and effort at complete these following courses. It’s just a complete blessing that there are people that gives us a second chance on getting this most important thing that can do so much and offer life much easier and successfully. Because it’s going to take a lot of hard work and I feel that I must put my heart and soul into getting my diploma and my degrees because I know feelings about my current life, and I’m not satisfied on how things are playing out because I’m not as happy with myself as I should be at my age.

 

Because I was the one to blame for not listening and rolling with the wrong crowd when I was in high school. But I’m very confident in what I have manifest into my vision for life of doing and being right for myself. By getting my life back on track the way it should’ve been, but I’m done beating myself down just ready to see how smart I know I am. My Biggest Motivation to myself is to prove to myself “That I can do this and stop saying I can’t do this and get with the program in doing what needing to be done for myself & My Family.