Dissertation (editing 2 chapters) about suicidal ideation

Edit Chapter 2 (Review of the Literature) and Chapter 3 (Methodology) based on comments left in the document.

Comments such as:
1. Write summaries of each section before moving on the the next section.
2. Edit vague terminology and circuitous sentences.
3. Add a few more literatures to review about suicide.
4. Specificity and detail for Chapter 3 to make sure that your study can be replicated.
5. Explain how other research methods would not be appropriate for the research questions.

The document I uploaded here contains some parts that I extracted from my chapter 2 and chapter 3. I will upload the whole document to the selected writer.