Fixing My Paper

so, i have already finished a paper, i need someone to fix the feedback my teacher gave me. give it to my tonight in 3 hours.

 

  • 1, Be sure you’re connecting ideas back to your claim rather than just summarizing
  • 2, Tell the 2 ways you’re reading the text (ex. dialogue, cinematography, lighting, costumes, interactions between characters, etc.)
  • 3, The paper needs to be over the text as a whole and this paper focuses primarily on one scene

Outline for Genetic Disease Review Project

Your paper will broadly explain the disorder, its prevalence, and history. You will
then explore the current view of the cellular and molecular origin of the disease. If
there are many theories, try to elaborate on ONE of the mechanisms as the focus of
your paper. Finally, discuss the social, ethical, and political issues that families with
the disease deal with.
Length: 3 4 pages, not including references.
Formatting: Microsoft Word, APA most current edition.
Details: 1 margins on all sides, double-spaced, 12 inch font

Please submit the outline of your genetic disease review project.  Although it is only an outline, you should have many ideas in place.  Review the guidelines (found in the reading list for this module) for more information about what is expected in your outline submission. There is also a video on the Learning Activities and Assessment page that explains how to write a 5-paragraph essay that you may find helpful.

Question Answer In Breif.

  • What do you think of EME? Why are people opposed to it?
  • Are you a consumer or a user of technology?
  • Do you think Hollywood and record companies have a right to alter or mandate changes to audio/video technology including TV’s, TIVO, gaming consoles, DVR’s, PC’s, phones and IPODS, in order to insure or enforce copyright law?
  • Do you think that the business model of “Hollywood” and “Big record labels” is obsolete because of the Internet and technology?
  • How has copyright affected the way you listen and acquire music, games and videos? Give your opinion and some examples.
  • What do you think about Digital Rights management?

Cte

First Module: In Discussion 1 you identified the classifications of the Special Population students – classifying students according to the Carl D. Perkins Career and Technical Education Federal Law. In addition to these classifications, there are additional ones in the American Disabilities Act. For this module, combine the Carl D. Perkins classifications with the American Disabilities Act classifications and record definitions for each one. Write a 1-page conclusion describing how this information can benefit a CTE teacher. ONE PAGE IS NOT A SHORT PARAGRAPH; IT MUST BE NO MORE THAN ONE INCH TOP AND BOTTOM AND ONE-INCH MARGINS. YOU CAN DOUBLE SPACE.

2nd paper 

Second Module: There are different teaching strategies/pedagogy that teachers use for different student learning styles and students with different abilities and disabilities. Regardless of the students ability to learn, a teacher should use the following resources to develop lesson plans: Learning Pyramid, Blooms Taxonomy. Search the internet for these two models. Graphically show both models and write a 2-page paper, your observation, of the models can be used to develop lesson plans that insure special population students will learn. TWO PAGES IS

  

NOT A SHORT PARAGRAPH, IT MUST BE NO MORE THAN ONE INCH TOP AND BOTTOM AND ONE-INCH MARGINS. YOU CAN DOUBLE SPACE