A 1000 words thesis introduction. Topic: Effect of group TranS-C on insomnia and

A 1000 words thesis introduction.
Topic: Effect of group TranS-C on insomnia and depression comorbid patients
As I receive minimal guidance from my professor, I don’t have much idea on how to write a thesis.
Nevertheless, I have written an introduction to my thesis based on some templates I found online, but it still doesn’t look right.
So I hope someone here can help me edit and amend my essay.
Here are some elements that I would like you to edit:
– wordings
– tone (more formal and academic)
– grammar
– structure
– citation
– content (anything I should add or delete)
– word count (the limit is 1000 words but now I have 1700 words)
etc.
Please feel free to contact me if there is any information you need from my study to fix my essay.
Thank you so much.

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Topic: Effect of group TranS-C on insomnia and appeared first on homework handlers.