Personal Statement for Admission into a Master’s Degree Program in Health Studies with a Concentration in Health Promotion

I need you to modify the attached personal statement. I am applying to another Master’s degree program, so i need this rewritten for that program. I need to replace the Environmental Nutrition with Health Studies in Health Promotion.

I have attached the degree descriptions from the university as well as the personal statement from Environmental Nutrition. If you have any questions, just let me know.