Museums and critical thinking skills

This is the essay question:
How compelling do you find Murrays argument that the Mathaf, and museums like it, are important for teaching critical thinking skills?
Mathaf is a museum in Qatar, no need to look at worldwide museums
Attached is a sample essay, this essay needs to have the same format as the attached sample. I also attached the rubric, and the reading. please write it in simple words, include in text citation