Cultural Identity

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Assessment of Personal Culture

You will be provided with Professor Jamisons chart that should be helpful to you as you describe your personal culture. If you belong to more than one culture, consider describing each and discussing conflicts you experience (or have experienced in the past) in reconciling the differences. As this is meant to be a tool to develop better self-knowledge, please include thoughts and observations about the present as well as reflections about the past and ideas/plans for the future.

revision of paper based on instructions

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Hi can you revise my paper based on the instructions submitted below

can you please add endnotes chichago/turabian style please and can you also add the required references in addition to adding two full pagse of information to bring me to the required number of 3000 words.
INSTRUCTIONS:
You will write a 3000 word double-spaced paper (approximately 10-12 pages) (plus title page, footnotes or endnotes, and bibliography) based upon your analysis of primary sources. You must choose a moment/incident that you will analyze, interpret, and contextualize.
  You should develop a research question that leads you to a compelling thesis statement.  You must include at least eight unique primary sources, including newspapers, magazines, chronicles, diary entries, government reports, photographs, or personal correspondence.
You should include at least five secondary readings in the form of books and journal articles. Of course, you can exceed the minimum number of primary and secondary sources.  Importantly, you cannot use essays published on websites for this paper under any circumstance.
.  If the paper does not include at least 4,500 words of narrative text, then you will fail the paper and the course.
If you fail to include footnotes/endnotes using Chicago Manual of Style/Turabian format, you will earn a zero on the paper.
Under no circumstance will I accept parenthetical citations.
If you fail to include eight primary documents you will deduct ten (10) points for each missing primary document. If you fail to include five secondary sources you will deduct five (5) points for each missing source. If you cite websites, then you will deduct fifty (50) points from your final paper grade.  If you fail to include a title page, then you will deduct ten (10) points.  If you fail to include a bibliography, then you will deduct ten (10) points.  I will not accept title pages and/or bibliographies submitted separately. If you submit more than one document, then you will
2deduct ten (10) points from the final paper grade. If you use bibliographic citations in your footnotes/endnotes, then you will deduct twenty-five (25) points from your final paper grade

Revision of paper

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Hi can you revise my paper based on the instructions submitted below

can you please add endnotes chichago/turabian style please and can you also add the required references in addition to adding two full pagse of information to bring me to the required number of 3000 words.
INSTRUCTIONS:
You will write a 3000 word double-spaced paper (approximately 10-12 pages) (plus title page, footnotes or endnotes, and bibliography) based upon your analysis of primary sources. You must choose a moment/incident that you will analyze, interpret, and contextualize.
  You should develop a research question that leads you to a compelling thesis statement.  You must include at least eight unique primary sources, including newspapers, magazines, chronicles, diary entries, government reports, photographs, or personal correspondence. 
You should include at least five secondary readings in the form of books and journal articles. Of course, you can exceed the minimum number of primary and secondary sources.  Importantly, you cannot use essays published on websites for this paper under any circumstance. 
.  If the paper does not include at least 4,500 words of narrative text, then you will fail the paper and the course.
If you fail to include footnotes/endnotes using Chicago Manual of Style/Turabian format, you will earn a zero on the paper.
Under no circumstance will I accept parenthetical citations.
If you fail to include eight primary documents you will deduct ten (10) points for each missing primary document. If you fail to include five secondary sources you will deduct five (5) points for each missing source. If you cite websites, then you will deduct fifty (50) points from your final paper grade.  If you fail to include a title page, then you will deduct ten (10) points.  If you fail to include a bibliography, then you will deduct ten (10) points.  I will not accept title pages and/or bibliographies submitted separately. If you submit more than one document, then you will
2deduct ten (10) points from the final paper grade. If you use bibliographic citations in your footnotes/endnotes, then you will deduct twenty-five (25) points from your final paper grade

english

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Q1. Choose a paragraph from your story. Do a word count using your word processor. Then try cutting the word count at least in half by eliminating unnecessary or repetitive words. Post both paragraphs so that we can see what you cut. Rather than choose 1 paragraph, I’d like you to choose one double spaced page (one page is ~250 words). I want you to do your best to eliminate about half of the words (this isn’t a hard-n-fast rule so just do your best). Then, post the original and the revision with the word count under each. (120words)

Q1-1. Post your analysis. What was gained or lost from this exercise? Do you think it improved your tension, your pacing, your characterization? How or why? (50words)

Q1-2.  Respond to a peer by doing Q1. That is, you’re going to revise their original in your own style. And post your analysis. What was gained or lost from this revision exercise? Do you think the student’s revision or your revision improved the student’s tension, pacing, or characterization? How or why? (170words)

Q2. What’s the role of the impressario? What does he provide the HA with? What’s their relationship? Then, analyze the HA’s feelings and thoughts toward the impressario. You might include analysis of tone, setting, characterization, theme, etc.

As always, cite from the text in your analysis! (100words)