revise the paper 15

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Can you help revise the paper (AP DRAFT 2)and provide an annotated bibliography page.

Here are the comments that teacher left.

Comments
Jin, After reading your draft, my overall impression is that you need to spend much more time describing, defining, and advocating your solution, using research to support your claims. Right now, your solution is supported by very little research, and I’m not even sure what it looks like or is intended to do at a practical level. You don’t need to invent a solution to the problem, but you do need to present all aspects of your solution in a way that shows it’s the best one. Who supports it? How much will it cost to implement? Who will it help? You should also be sure to stay away from describing the problem in too much detail. For example, your causation section is in “HCP territory,” meaning that you’re spending time talking about the problem, not the solution. You can assume that your reader is familiar with the problem and has read your HCP; imagine that the AP is picking up where the HCP left off. Think of causation as providing a solution that will get at the root of the problem–not as an opportunity to once again prove that the problem exists and is deserving of our attention. -Be sure to use multimodal evidence. Also, please be sure your essay follows a standard essay format, not an outline. I don’t mind if you use headings, but the way it’s written now makes your essay seem disconnected and organized somewhat randomly.

And I will attach the HCP that mentioned in the comments and the outline model. And I attached the prompt, rubric and two examples.

 

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It is past the date were I was to purchase them. The project is to: Set up the following trades using…

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It is past the date were I was to purchase them. The project is to: Set up the following trades using data from Yahoo Finance. CHOOSE A DIFFERENT STOCK FOR EACH POSITION. a) call b) put c) stock + covered call d) stock + floor e) bull spread f) straddle All options have to be purchased between February 1-8, 2012 • Record closing prices of the underlying stocks at expiration. You need to look-up the stock prices between the close on the expiration Friday and the open on Monday. Or, you will need to figure out how to get a past quote on a stock. Do NOT purchase penny options Purchase one contract for each option position (representing 100 shares) For the two positions needing a stock as well, purchase 100 shares of stock, too. Write one paragraph (three or four quick sentences) explaining: Price of underlying stock; option purchased or written to get the position (as well as premiums); How much was paid or received from premiums and how much was paid for the stock (and NET amount, too); What must happen to the price of the stock for the position to be profitable?

 

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phi

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Explain Rawls’ “original position” and “veil of ignorance.” What principles of justice does he claim would emerge from such a thought experiment?Answer the Philosophy Lab questions on page 380.Does alienation as described by Marx exist today in modern capitalist societies? Explain.What aspects of Marx’s philosophy do you see in the clip on domestic workers?Do you agree with Okin that typical family practices are largely structured by gender? If so, are these practices unjust? Why?
 
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casestudy 7 make sure there is no plagarism

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Read Leaked Movie Trailer and a Confidentiality Agreement and complete the questions at the end of the case study.

Make sure there is no plagiarism.

APA style.

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