Write a report of your senior year at School. In your report, reflect upon and discuss your accomplishments during your year. What were some of your goals? Did you attain those goals? If yes, tell your reader about this. If no, reflect on the reasons why. What did you do for fun this year? Did you learn any lesson other than academics; one that you may carry with you beyond high school? Explain this in detail.  What was the best thing that happened to you during this year and what, if anything, would you change if you could do the year over? (750 words – minimum)
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I’ll give some info: it was an amazing year for me. I had 1 goal which was getting a gpa 4.0 a and I achieved this goal in term 1 and 2 and im working on term 3 now. I did many things that were fun this year, i was in the student council which helped oraganize alot of school activities and events like a soccer tournemt and the suger free week. but sadly i didnt accomplish my goal of losing weight becuase of not having alot of time and having abad sleeping schedule.I learned many things this year and mastered the MLA. Julius caesar’s play was a fun topic which taught me many things.I also mastered writing informational articles and argumentative essays.My analyzing skills  The best thing that happened to me this year that maybe little people would agree was online learning and how it a great solution for the pandemic. I was really happy to study at home and I felt really comfortable. It was something i really wanted to do. Studying at home and living this lifestyle was something i wont forget because I ive never felt comfortable studying and feeling that much freedom before that. (DO IT IN A WAY THAT IM NOT SUPPORTING THE CORONA Virus:) If I would change 1 thing it would be being able to have graduation ceremony because its a day you cant  forget …
-This was little info about my year that could help you.
-You can make things up as long as it goes with the flow
-If u need any help or have any question ask me

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